That doesn't mean it won't have romantic moments, like this excerpt from Chapter 17, written in the point of view of family dad, Tom Burnett:
I filled a
glass with milk, got out a fork, and sat down at the kitchen counter. That’s
when I heard the bedroom door open and knew Karen was about to catch me
red-handed, eating red beans and rice in the middle of the night—a violation of
a small promise I’d made to myself to avoid eating between dinner one evening
and breakfast the next day. Well, at least I wasn’t breaking a promise to
anyone else. If my dad’s betrayal had done nothing else, it had taught me to
keep the important promises, the ones I made to others.
“Hi, honey,”
Karen said, her voice smoky with sleep.
“Hi, yourself.”
I lifted my fork defiantly. Just let her say something.
“Couldn’t
sleep, huh?” she asked. She must be postponing the inevitable assault
on my dignity.
“No. You
either?”
“I slept pretty
well for a while.” She looked at the bowl of hot food and I knew what was coming
next, but my sweetheart surprised me. “I don’t suppose you have any more of
that?”
“Um, uh, no.
No, this is the last.”
She sighed.
“Pity. I’ll find something else then.”
I watched as
she opened the refrigerator and started looking through its contents. “No
comments about eating in the middle of the night?”
She turned and
gave me a sweet, sleepy half smile. “Sometimes it’s good to break the rules,”
she said. “Frankly, this seems like a good time for some comfort food, don’t
you think?”
“Yeah. Yeah, I
thought so.” I took another bite of the spicy leftovers. Comfort. That was it,
exactly. Well, at least Karen understood that part.
“Oh, yeah. This
will do it.” She came out of the refrigerator with her arms loaded and calmly
went about making a sandwich from Friday’s meatloaf and two slices of wheat
bread, spreading mayonnaise and catsup with abandon. “Yum, this looks great!”
she announced as she put the condiments away and started toward the counter to
sit beside me.
“You’re not
obsessing about the calories?”
“Calories,
schmalories. We worry about them all day every day. A little letdown under
these rather extreme conditions might just help us remember we’re still alive
and still need a little peace and comfort where we can find it—even in food.”
She took a big bite. “Ummmm, that’s good!”
“Glad you’re
enjoying it.”
We sat for a
while, eating side by side in companionable silence. A few minutes later, my
bowl was empty and Karen’s sandwich gone. I finished the last of my milk and—I
couldn’t help it--I burped loudly. “Oops! Sorry. I guess the old stomach
doesn’t necessarily agree with your philosophy about midnight comfort food.”
Karen rubbed
her own middle. “My old stomach isn’t all that happy about it, either,” she
said. “I think I’m going to help myself to some antacid. Shall I get some for
you too?”
“Yeah. Thanks.”
She brought
over a bottle of peppermint-flavored tablets and we sat quietly, chewing. In
another minute, even that was gone. A moment of strained silence followed.
“Well? What’s
next?” I asked her. “Do you think you can go back to sleep now?”
Karen arched
one eyebrow. Her voice was smoky again, but not with sleep. “Come with me and
I’ll help you sleep too,” she offered.
She always
looked so sexy when she grinned like that. I couldn’t help remembering all the
reasons why I loved this difficult, amazing woman. “You’ve got a deal,” I told
her.
I put my arm
around my sweetheart and led her back to our bed.
Susan Aylworth is the author of eight published novels, all currently available in digital form for various e-readers. Her ninth book, ZUCCHINI PIE: GRANNY'S RECIPE FOR LIFE, is coming from Covenant Communications in June. Her tenth novel, RETURN TO RAINBOW ROCK, will soon be available as an original e-book, the seventh in the Rainbow Rock series. Find Susan at www.susanaylworth.com or follow her @SusanAylworth.
Susan Aylworth is the author of eight published novels, all currently available in digital form for various e-readers. Her ninth book, ZUCCHINI PIE: GRANNY'S RECIPE FOR LIFE, is coming from Covenant Communications in June. Her tenth novel, RETURN TO RAINBOW ROCK, will soon be available as an original e-book, the seventh in the Rainbow Rock series. Find Susan at www.susanaylworth.com or follow her @SusanAylworth.
Now I'm very curious as to why they are both stressed.
ReplyDeleteA really nice scene. You bring the characters to life beautifully with the dialogue. I do wonder, though, what the problem is. Sounds like it's not between them.
ReplyDeleteNo, the stress and the problems are not between them--although they impact everyone in the family. Thanks for sharing your ideas.
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