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Monday, August 5, 2019
It's an Ill Wind . . .
Meanwhile, that "ill wind" blew cooler air to our home in northern California. During July, when we typically expect the 100-degree+ temperatures, our highs registered in the middle-90s. Most days were actually pleasant.
Decades ago, we lived in Connecticut during a heat wave and I remember the misery. Not only were our temperatures in the upper-90s, but the humidity was at 98-99%. That turns hot into unbearable.
My thoughts have been with those suffering on the eastern side of the country, but (with some apology), I have to admit I'm grateful for the lovely days we've seen here. This week, when life is becoming livable again in the east and temperatures are rising in our hometown, we are AWOL, hanging out in cooler temperatures to the north.
We'll return to our home digs soon, knowing that the August heat will be there to welcome us. We can handle it. We've had a welcome break.
Susan Aylworth is the author of 18 published novels. Her latest is SUNNY'S SUMMER, a romance set in the Sierra foothills near her northern California home in the aftermath of the devastating #CampFire. Watch for AMBER IN AUTUMN, coming in September. She lives with her husband of 49 years, Roger. She loves to hear from readers. Find her at www.susanaylworth.com, @SusanAylworth, susan.aylworth.author@gmail.com, or facebook.com/Susan.Aylworth.Author. Also on Pinterest and Instagram.
Wednesday, June 12, 2019
What's with the weather?
Other places boasted wildflowers I have seldom seen in this dry high desert, celebrations in purple, white, and yellow. The scenes were pastoral, paint-worthy, and yes, beautiful. Unfortunately, we didn't stop long enough to get pictures there.
Given that, I don't begin to understand the processes that gave us snow in June and a beautiful trip across Nevada. I don't understand them, but I can certainly appreciate them. I did and I do!
Thursday, December 8, 2011
Nature Can Be Nasty
BENEATH SIERRA SKIES was not only my first book, but my best effort at the people-vs-nature plot. Of course, a story is more complicated when there are a few other things going on as well. Let me share a short segment from the book as an example.
In this scene, Robin and Brandon have been stranded by a plane crash which has left them both with minor, but debilitating injuries. They have lost their location devices so nobody knows where to find them and they've been unable to get any kind of signal out. They have made a shelter in the body of the airplane and are just waking up on their sixth day, awakening to the call of nature, when this scene takes place. It suggests a little more of what is happening in this story:
Oh yeah. They have their work cut out for them.The wind was howling furiously, clawing at their precarious shelter and driving a heavy snowfall with it. It was a blizzard, the first since their accident.
“Damn, I have great timing,” Robin said aloud.
“Hmm? What?” Brandon awoke slowly.
“Nothing,” Robin answered, her voice dripping disappointment as she trembled with the cold. “It’s just... we’re having a storm.”
Brandon, who still slept with his arm in a sling, edged up on his good elbow and looked out the window. “Um. Looks like a bad one.”
“I don’t think we’re going to have a hot breakfast.”
“No.” The wind roared and Brandon lay down again, drawing Robin close. “Looks like we’re just going to have to stay here and find ways to keep warm.” He nuzzled her hair and she felt a little thrill run through her.
“Down, boy,” she said, pulling away a little.
He grinned lazily. “Suit yourself. It just seemed like a good way to pass the time.”
Thursday, August 4, 2011
Breaking the Weather Rule
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One of the unwritten rules many would-be critics have warned me against is "Don't start with the weather." According to one reader, the weather is what one discusses when one has nothing to say.
So what do you do when the weather matters -- when it's so important to the setting of your story that it's practically a character in itself? Here is how I am starting one work-in-progress, a novel tentatively titled RIGHT FACE:
Winter had come early to Utah Valley. It was only the first week of October, but already the mercury had registered several consecutive days of sub-freezing weather. Outside in the quad, a relentless wind howled like a tortured soul, lashing the heavy snowfall into drifts and swales or driving it into the eyes of the students who dared to brave the cold. Even here, in the central hall of the Harris Fine Arts Center, the cold still penetrated. Other buildings on the BYU campus were kept toasty warm, but the H-FAC stayed at even, cooler temperatures year-around, a concession to the pianos and paintings.
Is that too much weather talk? Would you give up on me after the first paragraph just because I included the weather?
I'm hoping not, but I'll listen to anything you have to say.
